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Great job -- watched it 2wice

I love it, I watched it 2wice or 3 times... I forget now, but it was awesome. Make more!

Rawflimow

If this was just entered I would probably BLAM it, but it's freaking awesome. I love it, it's so random.

If you didnt get the subject line, you're an idiot. If you didn't appreciate this cartoon, you're an idiot. Therefore if you didn't appreciate this cartoon, you didn't get the subject line (by the transitive property of equality).

GREEEEEEAAAAT!

See subject line above ^.

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Good but could be better

I like the music in the background, but you need some fighting sounds, sword clashing, beams, etc. You also need to make the action faster. That was just WAY too slow for me. I got bored of it really quickly. Graphics could be a little better. Don't use shape tween again!

Make these improvements and some given by other reviewers and I'm sure you will be successful.

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Great job!

This is wonderful! You should keep making more of these. You could make either several shorts, or make a whole series of events in one movie, or just one long adventure. Up to you, but your idea is great and funny!

Finally something new and good in the portal. I've been blamming too much. Stupid crappy entries.

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floony responds:

Thanks, I going to make more:)

Not bad, but a few things to improve

This is a good flash, but it could be better. A few things you could do:
1. Please don't use hard-to-read text like in the beginning. Google dafont, which is a good site for fonts, and search for asian fonts. You will find tons that are pleasing to the eye and are legible.

2. Add more detail to your characters when you are far away (meaning not in the up close shots).

3. Square out rough edges that you have with buildings and character drawings. Smooth out rough edges that seem to curve a little.

4. If you have photoshop you can draw there and move to flash as png, but that might be a little harder. Try the other techniques first.

Hope this helps!

LP

Great story but...

Great Story, but the thing is, this kid doesn't need social help... he needs parents that can DRIVE him to school instead of making him wait for the bus...

Also, why are all the bullies and cool kids egg-heads? They look like princeton graduates rather than high-school kids.

very sad but semi-realistic story. Keep making more of this, you're a great artist/animator/story teller.

Funny, but not the best you have done.

That was awesome, but it was not the best you've done.

You should really continue this.

I think you should really continue this. You could go places? Wanna help me make galaxian lol?

-HK

Beautiful

This is really fantastic, I wish I could give it 100/10

Thank you come again

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